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Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4
SE: Narglii | SE: Charles

Edited to add the 5th page, because having parts of the same length is more appealing to me than not. XD Lamest way to instigate a fight Y/N? Gotta love NPCs.

Big thanks to :iconandantonius: for doing the flats for these. :)

Auuugghhhh pages 3 and 4 feel like something out of some cheesy anime. I should totally add glitter to Lillian, then she'd be like... Twilight-zombie. XD TORREN IS MESMERISED LOL. Also, my NPC dialogue... feels really... video game-y. XD SO many things I have to criticize here.

Anyways, I had this whole idea of Nevara City being some thriving capital full of people and activity, yadda yadda... then was reinformed that it is the complete opposite of that by ~Jared-Sol. I was too far into planning to want to completely change that, but I did some alterations... Nevara City is mostly desolated and derelict, but there are pockets that have been recovered and restored. This will be explained somewhat at the end of this round.

Lillian was a ton of fun to draw and shade. :D It took me a while to get used to her, I kept missing little details (like her bra, for a whole page XD). Adelmar's more of a cameo at the moment, but he'll come in soon. There's also one other itty bitty cameo, guess who? 8D;

The EE makes its triumphant return! As a shop sign. :iconteheplz: Part of its sordid past, ohoho. As for the text on the shop sign, it's... garbled Greek. The shop's a weapons front, but I didn't want to have the sign in English text because A) It should be tagai text which I've yet to invent, and B) Torren can't read. So it's all Greek to him olololololol *shot*

Aaaannd I can't think of anything else to say. Onto the credits!


Flat colours by =Andantonius
Lillian and Adelmar belong to *Kristehvampire
Narglii belongs to =pargile
Felix and Martyr belong to ~semehammer
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:iconpargile:
8D This should be fun.

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Early to rise and early to bed - makes a man healthy but socially dead
:iconhaikera-baiketsu:
That's page 5. :icontehe:

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"They might kill you, but are otherwise pretty forgiving"
:iconsemehammer:
Torren's such a chick-magnet X3
And the backgrounds...make me hate you >< Awesome as always.
:iconhaikera-baiketsu:
The smell of beef always attracts the womenfolk~ >w>

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"They might kill you, but are otherwise pretty forgiving"
:iconproffate:
Oh god, that last face. XD

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"Great works are performed, not by strength, but by perseverance." Samuel Johnson
:iconhaikera-baiketsu:
Hence why this was a better page to end at. :iconteheplz:

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"They might kill you, but are otherwise pretty forgiving"
:iconkristehvampire:
URRAAAGHHH

TORREN
CAN BE
SO
CUUUUUTE. :XX

I want to hug the stuffing out of that big lug.

GAW, now I'm worried if I made him too agressive in my round. xD;;;

Also also;

THIS IS BEAUTIFULLLL. Your dedication to backgrounds amaze me. xDD

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"We've uh, figured out how to travel through time... at the speed of regular time with... plastic bags."

ಠ_ಠ"

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:iconombre-de-clause:
Torren's a lucky boy XD

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Where do I get my ideas from? I make them up. Out of my head.~ Neil Gaiman
:icondreamwish:
The girls getting excited over the sweets shop are kind of adorable. XD Also I want cake now. The coloring is, as always, beautiful. Nice job!
:iconhaikera-baiketsu:
Hehe, there'd be a lot of stuffing to squeeze out. xP

I wouldn't worry about aggressiveness... like... if someone's taken a strike at him he'd go right after them. He's just kinda cowed when a ton of others are around.

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"They might kill you, but are otherwise pretty forgiving"

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